Many people believe that nature plays a more significant impact on human adult intelligence, while others claim that an individual can train himself to become high-intelligent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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and heritage of parents influence most

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human adult intelligence,

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a statement about the role of

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own experience too. From my point of view, it is the nurture that affects

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abilities

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of an adult human than

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of them. Human

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is a very versatile concept

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because it is not only physical features

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but

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, a legacy from parents. Intelligence,

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of all, cannot be inherited from a parent to a child, but it is the result of the interaction of many

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transmitted from parents. Scientists have proved that identical twins have more

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in intellectual

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than dizygotic ones.

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contributed to an opinion that says that

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had an actual effect on the children’s brainpower is affected by

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and

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.

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, there are certain cases where the intellectual

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of a person have been affected by factors

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of

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or nutrition. And several studies have shown that

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nutrition does affect the judgement of

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and especially breakfast had a huge impact on children. Studies have shown that students that ate breakfast before lessons made fewer mistakes during achievement tests while students who missed the breakfast had lower speed and accuracy during tasks. It shows that even little things daily affect the mind of a human. In conclusion, the surrounding of

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have more effect on

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intellectual

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of him or her.