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Today single-use products are still very common. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions?

#single-use #products
it is true that
single-use
product
 is very popular in our life because people can get
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 for cheap and for hygiene reason.
as a result
, our environment will be damaged and make
extras
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 expenses when
buy
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 something, but
this
 can be tackled by making
policy
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 and reusable
campaign
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.
Firstly
, most
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people
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the people
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 are faced the environmental
problem
 because using
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products
 which affect
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the number of rubbish.
This
 has been confirmed by some
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environmental
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the environmental
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activist
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activists
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 and non-government
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organizations
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 which showed that the majority of
single-use
product
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products
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 trigger environmental damage
such
 as damaging the coastal in some
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the sea
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sea
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.
in other words
, in a
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 of
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the consumer
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consumer
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consumers
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 using
this
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this product
these products
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products
 can increase people’s spending without realizing, when they buy
products
such
 as water,
coffe
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coffee
, and the other drink
products
.
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long
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 term, it can increase the number of spending to buy unnecessary
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products
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also
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 make a great
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 like climate change. There are several actions that people and government could take to solve the
problem
 describe above.
Firstly
, a common solution would be to do
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 environmental campaign. the advantage of
this
solusion
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solution
 can make long-term about
people’s
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people
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 awareness
if
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of
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 using non-reusable
products
 are not good for
earth
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 and make serious
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problems
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 in future. A
second
 measure would be for governments to provide policies for industries to
decrese
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decrease
 or even removed
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product
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products
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, and give punishment for
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the person
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person
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people
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 who break the rules. in
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conclusion
, while
the
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single-use
products
 are very common in our life,
but
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it
better
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 to solve
this
problem
 by changing with
reusable
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product
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products
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 to make
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sustainable
suistainable
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 environment because using
of
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single-use
products
 can damage and make
our
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nature to be unhabitable
places
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place
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 to live within.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental pollution
  • landfills
  • ecosystems
  • resource depletion
  • decompose
  • throwaway culture
  • sustainability
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • biodegradable
  • compostable
  • recycling
  • waste management
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