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Some people think parents should read stories to children. Others thinkparents don't need to do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies bythemselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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These days people place a
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 themselves, while
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 should be read by their parents. In my
view
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 it is better for mothers to read a
book
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 them. To advance a convincing theory I could deal with why it is important. Due to lack of free
time
 these days family members have less
time
 to spend with each other and
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 plain to see it has had a
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 on their relationship. We all need more
time
 with our mother, father and siblings to talk and have fun. We all have work to do during the day but every night by reading a
book
 or watching a movie together we can have more family
time
. We should consider that
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 each of us
some times
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sometimes
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need
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time
 for
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. Gone is the idea of not respecting
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 and just
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.
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, sometimes I go out alone and I have a cup
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 and think about my future plans or I read a
book
. In general, I do whatever I want. I read
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research, it said If we have a spare
time
 for ourselves, we will even have
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relation
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 with other people. I have searched about
this
 topic a lot .on top of that another future which I should mention is children should learn to have liberty. Watch tv alone or read a
book
. In
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 they will
also
 learn more. To conclude,
although
 reading a
book
 alone has good effects, we must be aware of our relationship with our family members.
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