you have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter - Correct the information in the article - explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about the situation

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
in regards to the article published
last
week on 10th April 2022 about tourism in Townsville. Unfortunately, the article contained wrong
information
about the imported materials sold for shopping at higher rates. Our town has well known for local manufacturing of garments and handicrafts. The outreach of the
magazine
is huge and any incorrect
information
about the town directly affects the economy of the people living here because tourism is the only source of income for the locals living here. Tourists who have been here are aware of the reality and will raise
the
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questions about the inaccurate
information
published in the
magazine
which will impact the brand
magazine
.
Hence
, I am requesting you to correct the
information
in the
next
release of the
magazine
or share the original
information
on social sites marking the data in the
magazine
as human error. Yours faithfully, Bhavesh Panchal
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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