A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent days, people seem to be more interested in social status and financial income than moral
virtues
. In my opinion, values Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
trust
, empathy and courage are way Use synonyms
important
than society ranks.
Correct quantifier usage
more important
First
of all, social status and material possessions are volatile. Linking Words
For instance
, when Linking Words
Wall
Street stock exchange fell, many wealthy families found themselves in Correct article usage
the Wall
a
extreme crisis. All their savings and stocks were lost, and they were left with nothing; their social status abruptly crashed and they had to rebuild their position from the beginning. Change the article
an
This
clearly shows how much can fluctuate physical possessions, and why it is not the best way to judge someone's worth.
Linking Words
Secondly
, Linking Words
virtues
hardly change over time. In order to develop a long intimate relationship or, simply, a supervisor-employee relationship, these values are significant. Use synonyms
Virtues
, Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
honor
, courage, empathy and Change the spelling
honour
trust
are the basis to build Use synonyms
these kind
of relationships because, Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
for instance
, if there is no Linking Words
trust
, Use synonyms
supervisor
are unlikely to assign important projects to employees. Fix the agreement mistake
supervisors
Furthemore
, it is more difficult for a clerk to acquire a higher position, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
therefore
, a higher income to sustain his family. Linking Words
Same
can be said regarding love relationships. If there is no Correct article usage
The same
trust
, it is likely that the relationship crumbles and partners distance Use synonyms
themeselves
Correct your spelling
themselves
by
each other.
In conclusion, I believe that moral Change preposition
from
virtues
are considerably important in order to judge a person's worth rather than social rank and economic possessions. If people take Use synonyms
ethic
values more into consideration than stocks and ranks, it highly creates a better society.Replace the word
ethical
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite