You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

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Dear Angela, I hope you and your family are doing fine, and I’m sorry I haven’t been in touch recently. I’m writing to let you know that I have resigned from my previous company and took a new

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recently. Do you remember that I was working for a consultancy firm and I told you how much I was looking forward to changing my

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? Well, I have joined a

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agency

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month and the new

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is exciting. In my previous

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, I was working really long hours and, to be honest, the pay wasn’t great. So basically I applied for a

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at a new company that was looking for people enthusiastic about taking

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and are interested to

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. I thought it is a good fit for my expectation and took the opportunity. I was a bit nervous in the interview, but in the end, I got the

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as a senior

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consultant. The remuneration in the new

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is better, the working conditions are great and I don’t have to work long hours anymore.

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, they offer performance bonuses and I would be able to

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to different places and explore many places! I have

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enrolled in a diploma course at the University of Edinburgh and started a new

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blog. My parents have come to meet me two days ago and I have plans to take them to show them around. With love, Emma

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

242 words

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The Closing

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