Some people believe that children's experiences before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
It is considered that the
experiences
from childhood greatly influence their future
life
, while there are others who think that the experiences
while they are in high school
have more impactful. In my opinion, I truly believed that their choices are directly based on their interest at the teenage age as the interests are not reliable and stable during a young age.
On the one hand, children
make decisions for their future
careers based on what they relish during a young age when there is no peer pressure and no other influence yet. In fact, those decisions for future
life
will be based on their aptitude and they are fully aware of their strength and weakness. As a result
, they know the surest career path to achieving those dreams. For example
, children
who are talented at drawing know which school
they want to go to and what kind of greatest artist they want to be when they are grown up. Therefore
, the experiences
before going to school
definitely strongly influent their professional life
.
On the other hand
, there are the children
who do not really have any idea which career path to go until they learn and figure it out at school
. They will be thought what kind of jobs exist and how these jobs are valuable in school
, for instance
, computer engineering. There is no alternative way to understand the scope of this
position until they experience it at school
. Therefore
, these experiences
will surely affect them when it comes to deciding their occupation after the school
In conclusion, while people argued that which experiences
mainly affect and come from while children
are making decisions about their future
life
, I opine that the decision of people after high school
is a more positive impact in the long run.Submitted by maythe.hlaing90 on
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