It is better the students to live away from the home during their university studies rather than staying with their parents. To what extend you agree or disagree?

According to some people, it is better for

Add an article

the student

a student

show examples

student

Fix the agreement mistake

students

show examples

to engage in higher

study

away from parenting supervision than living with them in one home. I completely agree with

this

notion and believe that

this

way is more beneficial to offspring in many aspects.

To begin

with, undertaking university

study

apart from parents

encorages

Correct your spelling

encourages

maturity of one's outlook in his adulthood.

This

is

far

Add an article

a far

the far

show examples

better way to learn

responsibilty

Correct your spelling

responsibility

and how to take care of

student's

Fix the agreement mistake

students'

show examples

problems because he is away from his comfort

zoon

Correct your spelling

zone

show examples

.

For instance

,

Add an article

the student

a student

show examples

student

Fix the agreement mistake

students

show examples

will get a chance to manage

his

Correct pronoun usage

their

show examples

financial matters as well as adopt a healthy

Correct your spelling

lifestyle

show examples

life style

Correct your spelling

lifestyle

show examples

of food and sleep habit.

This

, in turn, enhance his personality and

confidency

Correct your spelling

confidence

.

Furthermore

, living in dorms gives

adolescence

Replace the word

adolescents

show examples

a chance to explore the actual world in different aspects distant from

influence

Add an article

the influence

show examples

of

his

Correct pronoun usage

their

show examples

family.

This

allows

to

Correct pronoun usage

one to

show examples

create one's own network of friends and acquaintances, not those

votted

Correct your spelling

voted

by parents as they might think are appropriate friends. Through

this

, expansion of younger

horizon

Fix the agreement mistake

horizons

show examples

which

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

is a basic concept in

university's

Change noun form

university

show examples

life.

Finally

,

independancy

Correct your spelling

independency

promote orientation and

self motivation

Add a hyphen

self-motivation

show examples

for

study

as

student

Add an article

the student

a student

show examples

must

recoginze

Correct your spelling

recognize

the importance

to

Change preposition

of

show examples

success

Replace the word

succeed

show examples

academically to ensure

better

Correct article usage

a better

show examples

future.

For example

, in my own experience,

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

have witnessed youth who at

first

were extremely

dependants

Replace the word

dependent

show examples

, blossomed into mature, capable,

able

Correct word choice

and able

show examples

to manage their academic and social lives very effectively.

Hence

, permits

Correct article usage

the developing

show examples

developing

Replace the word

development

show examples

of initiative needed to think creatively and to discover true potential. In conclusion,

although

attending college from

Correct pronoun usage

their parents

show examples

parents

Change noun form

parents'

parent's

show examples

house has reasonable advantages,

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

believe the benefit is enormous for the youngers when they leave their houses

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

study

for a while.