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It is better the students to live away from the home during their university studies rather than staying with their parents. To what extend you agree or disagree?

#students #home #university #studies #parents
According to some people, it is better for
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the student
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student
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students
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 to engage in higher
study
 away from parenting supervision than living with them in one home. I completely agree with
this
 notion and believe that
this
 way is more beneficial to offspring in many aspects.
To begin
 with, undertaking university
study
 apart from parents
encorages
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encourages
 maturity of one's outlook in his adulthood.
This
 is
far
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a far
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 better way to learn
responsibilty
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responsibility
 and how to take care of
student's
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students'
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 problems because he is away from his comfort
zoon
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.
For instance
,
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the student
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student
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students
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 will get a chance to manage
his
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 financial matters as well as adopt a healthy
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lifestyle
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life style
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 of food and sleep habit.
This
, in turn, enhance his personality and
confidency
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confidence
.
Furthermore
, living in dorms gives
adolescence
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 a chance to explore the actual world in different aspects distant from
influence
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 of
his
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their
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 family.
This
 allows
to
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one to
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 create one's own network of friends and acquaintances, not those
votted
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voted
 by parents as they might think are appropriate friends. Through
this
, expansion of younger
horizon
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which
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is a basic concept in
university's
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 life.
Finally
,
independancy
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independency
 promote orientation and
self motivation
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 for
study
 as
student
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the student
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 must
recoginze
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recognize
 the importance
to
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success
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 academically to ensure
better
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 future.
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, in my own experience,
i
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 have witnessed youth who at
first
 were extremely
dependants
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, blossomed into mature, capable,
able
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 to manage their academic and social lives very effectively.
Hence
, permits
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the developing
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developing
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 of initiative needed to think creatively and to discover true potential. In conclusion,
although
 attending college from
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their parents
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parents
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parents'
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 house has reasonable advantages,
i
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I
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 believe the benefit is enormous for the youngers when they leave their houses
for
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to
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study
 for a while.
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