In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Nowadays, there is an increasing trend of overqualification because
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issues, and the highly competitive
job
market. Some argue that
this
is a temporary situation
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the world. In my opinion,
this
is a structural issue that demands government measures, and
also
a cultural change. I intend to present in
this
essay some causes, and solutions for
this
annoying
problem
. The
first
reason that makes me understand that unemployment and high qualification are not
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temporary
problem
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is the economical crises around the world. Generally, during crises, it is important that the country governments carry out some practical measures to improve their economies, like,
for instance
, incentives for startup
companies
. The more startup
companies
there are, the more new
job
positions there will be.
This
is the best of both worlds for
job
seekers.
For example
, my brother was highly qualified with many degrees and masters.
However
, he could only find a
job
after a Brazilian government help program aimed at startup
companies
. Through
this
program new
companies
were allowed to borrow money with a lower interest rate, and, as consequence provide new jobs for young jobseekers.
In addition
, I think that a cultural change related to overqualification could
also
help to deal with
this
problem
. Some recent studies have shown that people tend usually to overstudy because of the high competition to get a
job
. Young people with high remuneration expectations are very common in recent days,
for example
.
Thus
, it is important that
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balance properly their expectations and the reality. To summarize,
although
it is tough to deal with
this
problem
, the benefits of reducing unemployment far outweigh the drawbacks. Not only because of the
job
positions
,
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but
also
because it is related to the new generation.
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