In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

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Nowadays, there is an increasing trend of overqualification because
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issues, and the highly competitive
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market. Some argue that
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the world. In my opinion,
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. The
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reason that makes me understand that unemployment and high qualification are not
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is the economical crises around the world. Generally, during crises, it is important that the country governments carry out some practical measures to improve their economies, like,
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, incentives for startup
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. The more startup
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there are, the more new
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seekers.
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, my brother was highly qualified with many degrees and masters.
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after a Brazilian government help program aimed at startup
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. Through
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were allowed to borrow money with a lower interest rate, and, as consequence provide new jobs for young jobseekers.
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, I think that a cultural change related to overqualification could
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. Some recent studies have shown that people tend usually to overstudy because of the high competition to get a
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. Young people with high remuneration expectations are very common in recent days,
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this unemployed people
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balance properly their expectations and the reality. To summarize,
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, the benefits of reducing unemployment far outweigh the drawbacks. Not only because of the
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but
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because it is related to the new generation.
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