In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
Nowadays, there is an increasing trend of overqualification because
economical
issues, and the highly competitive Change preposition
of economical
job
market. Some argue that this
is a temporary situation of
the world. In my opinion, Change preposition
in
this
is a structural issue that demands government measures, and also
a cultural change. I intend to present in this
essay some causes, and solutions for this
annoying problem
.
The first
reason that makes me understand that unemployment and high qualification are not a
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problem
is the economical crises around the world. Generally, during crises, it is important that the country governments carry out some practical measures to improve their economies, like, Fix the agreement mistake
problems
for instance
, incentives for startup companies
. The more startup companies
there are, the more new job
positions there will be. This
is the best of both worlds for job
seekers. For example
, my brother was highly qualified with many degrees and masters. However
, he could only find a job
after a Brazilian government help program aimed at startup companies
. Through this
program new companies
were allowed to borrow money with a lower interest rate, and, as consequence provide new jobs for young jobseekers.
In addition
, I think that a cultural change related to overqualification could also
help to deal with this
problem
. Some recent studies have shown that people tend usually to overstudy because of the high competition to get a job
. Young people with high remuneration expectations are very common in recent days, for example
. Thus
, it is important that this unemployed people
balance properly their expectations and the reality.
To summarize, Change the determiner
this unemployed person
these unemployed people
although
it is tough to deal with this
problem
, the benefits of reducing unemployment far outweigh the drawbacks. Not only because of the job
positions,
but Remove the comma
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also
because it is related to the new generation.Submitted by leonardoganem on
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