Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview and give me the accurate score .
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m
writing to you to apply for your recent
opened job opportunity that you have announced Change the word
recently
in
your website, I see that you need an interior designer who Change preposition
on
have
experience Change the verb form
has
with
working in designing restaurants. Change preposition
apply
I’m
a fresh graduate with a degree in interior design. Furthermore
, My internship and graduate project was
all about designing restaurants and cafes. As an Correct subject-verb agreement
were
intern
I worked closely with top experienced designers who engaged me with them to enhance the whole place decoration and to take care of all the little details. Add a comma
intern,
Additionally
, I can also
work on improving the entire customer’s journey from the beginning to the end since I took master practical courses of
how to design an excellent experience and ensure that the people are satisfied Change preposition
on
with
. Correct pronoun usage
with it
However
, I’m
sure that I can be the best worker who will help to take the restaurant’s design to the next level.
I’m
looking forward to hear
back from you. Change the verb form
hearing
However
, I will be free in
Change preposition
on
the
Correct article usage
apply
Monday’s
afternoon to have a meeting with you.
Thank you,
Best regards,
Sarah AljuaidChange noun form
Monday
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Coherence and Cohesion
You should be a bit more consistent with capitalization, such as 'My internship' should be 'my internship'.
Coherence and Cohesion
Be careful with run-on sentences. Try to break long sentences into shorter, clearer ones for better readability.
Task Achievement
You clearly explained your current situation and how it makes you a good fit for the job.
Task Achievement
The letter has a polite and professional tone, which is suitable for a job application.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.