In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

In recent years, an increasing number of communities are concerned about accommodation. The community hold different opinions in terms of the issue of whether the majority of
people
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are fond of renting an apartment. I believe that the benefits of
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its drawbacks. One of the reasons is that nowadays plenty of
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can'
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afford the expensive house
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especially
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youngsters, who occupy the most.
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,
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the limited
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,
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buy houses which are either big but old or cosy but tiny
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, which makes them unsatisfied.
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renting a house is a useful way to tackle
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dilemma,
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a compromise scheme for those.
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,
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living in a
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apartment can still enjoy the comfort and warmth of a
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where they can kick back and relax as well. Apart from that, another benefit is that many families have to change their living places because of work or travel, resulting in renting an apartment being a very convenient and optional solution.
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, when they work in a new company which doesn'
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throw away from their original accommodation,
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a great deal of inconvenience for those commuters.
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, there is no denying that renting a
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near the workplace is more available for workers
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them to sleep more and not need to get up too early. It has to be admitted that living in a
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rented sometimes contributes to a sense of unsafety for tenants, after all, it's a
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that doesn'
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belong to them.
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, it's inevitable that tenants can'
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do whatever they want in case of destroying
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items
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as furniture in the residence, or they have to compensate their landlords. In conclusion,
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some communities hold that a rented house is unacceptable, I am still convinced that
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is reasonable and applicable.

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task
Balance your view. State both good and bad points clearly and evenly.
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grammar
Check grammar and sentence form. Use simple, true sentences; avoid long, tangled parts.
content
The idea that renting can help many people is clear.
structure
The essay has a basic form with intro, body parts and conclusion.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rent
  • buy
  • home
  • house
  • owner
  • landlord
  • tenant
  • lease
  • contract
  • deposit
  • monthly
  • money
  • cost
  • price
  • loan
  • repair
  • fix
  • maintenance
  • move
  • stay
  • freedom
  • budget
  • plan
  • future
  • advantage
  • disadvantage
  • plus
  • minus
  • security
  • risks
  • rules
  • change
  • place
  • own
  • ownership
  • money
  • income
  • stay longer
  • stay short
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