Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years the conservation of wildlife

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and

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has become a subject of debate in each part of the world.

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, a myriad of people

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the idea that the protection of

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and

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has been given inordinate amounts of

resources

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and attention. I completely disagree and believe that even more

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and attention should be spent on saving wild

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and

birds

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. Most people think that too much

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and

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is allocated

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saving

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lives

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the lives

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of

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and

birds

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. They argue that

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is unnecessary because when different species like dinosaurs and Dodo

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became extinct, they did not bring any serious problems

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the planet.

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, spending

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huge amounts of

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and

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on their protection is actually wasting our precious

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which could in turn be utilized to tackle more serious issues

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as deprivation and malnutrition in some African countries to help and protect the

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of poorer people. Having said that, I believe that it is by no means not too much and even more

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and

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should be devoted to their preservation. The main reason is that human is responsible for

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of the dangers that these

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have faced. By illegal poaching and destroying their habitats, we have endangered their

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and it is now our moral and ethical duty to spend as much

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and

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as needed to rescue these species.

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, if more and more

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wild

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and

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die out, our ecosystem might be severely damaged since our

lives

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are heavily dependent on each other. A recent study has indicated that if bees,

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, became extinct, the whole living world would come to an end within less than three years. These all

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why it is important to devote

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of

money

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and

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to preserve them and that human needs to do even more to save them and their own

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as well. It is true that there are many serious issues which need huge amounts of

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and plenty of

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, but it does not mean that endangered

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should be sacrificed. By paying more attention to wild species and even

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, we can guarantee their existence as well as our own.