Nowadays, young people admire sports stars though they often do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

unarguably, today's youth adore modern

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Catholics

and many take them as a

role

-model,

although

, these

role

models are not perfect and they perhaps should not be selected as someone to follow. When most sportsmen or women tend to use drags and mostly are not educated. I think

this

trend has more negative sides.

Firstly

, even though the

sports

celebrities

may be famous and successful but

this

does not mean they have all

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to stay as a

role

model for the young generation. Because in many ,cases they may present a person who only cares about money and financial benefits without caring about any moral and ethical behaviour.

In other words

, they tend to earn

an enormous amounts

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of money without any help and aid

to

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from

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charity

organisation

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organisations

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instead

they like to spend their money

for

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on

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publishing their photos in magazines.

For example

, Chavez as a famous football player used to use huge scope of drugs;

therefore

,

this

sort of

sports

stars

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may not be a perfect

role

model for youth to choose. To resume with, a significant proportion of

sports

celebrities

tend to be uneducated or they have

low

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educational degree, if adolescent follows

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footsteps they may end up empty-handed in the case of failure on their sport-related goals; when

this

young person would not have a university degree finding a

well paid

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job in their future will be a hard task for them.

Also

,

lack

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of proper education for

sports

celebrities

could damage other

celebrities

like actors because less educational knowledge may lessen their respect in society. To conclude, I am still convinced that the negative side of choosing

a famous

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the face of a famous sport

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sports

face as a

role

model may bring enormous negative impacts on future adults.