The roads in major cities today are often difficult to travel on. What are the causes of this situation ? What is the solution ?

Over the
last
decade,
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of automobiles on
roads
are drastically increased which is a root cause
for
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today's
traffic
.
Traffic
and narrow
roads
is
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a major challenge for the public across the developed cities
in
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the globe as they cannot reach
the
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destination
on-time
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. In the following
paragarphs
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paragraphs
, I explore the detailed travel problems in the major cities and solutions to fix
such
issues.
To begin
with, in urban areas almost everyone
commute
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to work by riding their own
vechicles
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vehicles
which
increase
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increases
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traffic
and leads to long waiting at
traffic
signals, wastage of fuel, and cause air pollution.
In addition
, they
do
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not able to reach their offices on time due to the narrow and short
roads
.
For example
, As per
the
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recent article published
on
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the "India Times"
news paper
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states that 7 out of 10 people in Delhi city go to work lately due to the increased
traffic
and
also
the amount of fuel consumed by cars is
also
increased due to the slow moment.
Thus
,
the
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traffic
is a real concern for the public, environmental activists, and governments. Be that as it may, the
soution
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solution
exists for
the
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every
problems
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mentioned above.
First
and foremost, to address the
traffice
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traffic
issue the policymakers must improve the public transport like inter-city buses and trains.
For instance
, The Nepal government banned
the
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private transport
in
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the
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peak hours and enforced the rule to commute by
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public
transtport
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transport
. To address narrow
roads
,
municpalities
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municipalities
must build the flyovers and infrastructure to widen the
roads
.
As a result
, the number of vehicles on the road declines and
improve
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the quality of the air. To summarise,
the
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traffic
is
the
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global challenge in tier-one cities and
pollute
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pollutes
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the air.
However
, they can be resolved by decreasing the number of vehicles by providing the public transport facility for everyone.
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