Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of distance learning. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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easier.
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why the best option that everyone
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is distance learning due to the fact
that is
more convenient and accessible. In
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I will discuss the merits and drawbacks of online learning. To commence with, virtual learning is popular in every part of the world
most
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specially
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in
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this
time
of
Covid-19
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pandemic.
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business
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most
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the schools are affected and need to
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closed
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.
Therefore
, to continue the education of the students, virtual learning was introduced which is beneficial to
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them.
For instance
, if the learners are staying at home while studying they are safe not to have the virus because they do not need to go outside.
Also
, the parents can guide them after online study if they have
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about the discussion.
Lastly
, students have more
time
to get bond with their
family
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to have some whale of
time
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.
Consequently
, online learning
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some
dowside
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downside
downsides
such
as it will affect the health of the individuals and prone to
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procrastinate
their task.
For example
, just like my nephew since the online study started he become obese due to
lack
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of exercise
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the reason that they just stay at home.
Besides
that, he will not mention to his parents that he has a lot of
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until he did not
recongnize
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recognize
that he has many
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to do because no one will ask for
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on daily basis. To sum up, in many ways it
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advantages to learn online
such
as it is
more
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safer and have more
time
with family. But, on the other side children are prone to have
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disease
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diseases
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like obesity and
also
become lazy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distance learning
  • Flexibility
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effective
  • Courses
  • Technology skills
  • Personalized
  • Upskill
  • Social interaction
  • Self-discipline
  • Connectivity
  • Hands-on experience
  • Employer recognition
  • Learning outcomes
  • Online degrees
  • Platforms
  • In-person training
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