Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of distance learning. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In
this
contemporary time
, due to the burgeoning of technology life become more
easier. Change the word
apply
That is
why the best option that everyone choose
is distance learning due to the fact Change the verb form
chooses
that is
more convenient and accessible. In this
essay
I will discuss the merits and drawbacks of online learning.
To commence with, virtual learning is popular in every part of the world Add a comma
,essay
most
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apply
specially
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especially
in
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during
this
time
of Covid-19
pandemic. Correct article usage
the Covid-19
Thus
, all of
Change preposition
apply
business
most Add an article
the business
specially
the schools are affected and need to Replace the word
especially
Add a missing verb
be closed
closed
. Change the verb
close
Therefore
, to continue the education of the students, virtual learning was introduced which is beneficial to the
them. Remove the article
apply
For instance
, if the learners are staying at home while studying they are safe not to have the virus because they do not need to go outside. Also
, the parents can guide them after online study if they have Add an article
a question
question
about the discussion. Fix the agreement mistake
questions
Lastly
, students have more time
to get bond with their family
to have some whale of Fix the agreement mistake
families
time
.
Add an article
a time
Consequently
, online learning have
some Change the verb form
has
dowside
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downside
downsides
such
as it will affect the health of the individuals and prone to procastinate
their task. Correct your spelling
procrastinate
For example
, just like my nephew since the online study started he become obese due to lack
of exercise Correct article usage
a lack
for
the reason that they just stay at home. Change preposition
apply
Besides
that, he will not mention to his parents that he has a lot of task
until he did not Change to a plural noun
tasks
recongnize
that he has many Correct your spelling
recognize
assignment
to do because no one will ask for Change to a plural noun
assignments
it
on daily basis.
To sum up, in many ways it Correct pronoun usage
them
have
advantages to learn online Change the verb form
has
such
as it is more
safer and have more Change the word
apply
time
with family. But, on the other side children are prone to have Add an article
a disease
disease
like obesity and Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
also
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