Some say that because many people are living much longer ,the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, life expectancy has been increasing in terms of modern medicine and some other factors. Majority claim that at the expense of long ages ,the retirement
age
should be extended .However
, I do not agree with this
point of view.
Firstly
, despite the fact that the majority of people are living longer recruits are still ageing at a certain age
.In other words
, long
life expectancy does not mean high productivity .As the workers get older, their brains would become less active .Correct article usage
a long
As a result
, they are not able to compete with younger employers . Moreover
, ageing makes them less reaction and unable to adapt to the physical demand of their jobs . In addition
to this
,those who have a long lifespan tend to obtain some chronical
illnesses and Correct your spelling
chronic
this
obligates them to take sick leaves.
Secondly
, we know that grandparents are the main provider of national and cultural values.Therefore
, prolonging the retirement age
and engaging the old with the work will seriously harm the fabric of society. In other words
,grandparenting plays an indispensable role in the upbringing and nursing of the young generation and because of having less time for grandchildren they may walk on a criminal road. For example
,according to the statistics in the family which have grandparents the ratio of criminal reports is considerably low .
In conclusion, the retirement age
should be remained
despite a longer lifespan as their health condition is worse at a certain Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
age
.Moreover
,grandparents are the most important people of
society in upbringing new generation.Change preposition
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