Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some Humans tend to believe

that vast alternatives

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are available for

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current

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era. I completely agree with the given statement. In

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in detail for that. At the outset, If we imagine ourselves in past times, say in the decade of 1980 or 1990 we have limited

options

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to choose from. Innovation and technology

has

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changed our lives entirely.

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, in earlier times we had to communicate via letter or fax only and that

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took so long. But, nowadays we are having numerous

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to communicate. We can mail,

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and

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available option is phone call and text.

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, after the creation of social networking sites.

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, we find abundant

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to select from.

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, if we talk about mode of transport, in back decades we had insufficient

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and had to cope

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with what was available. Luxury and amenities were rare and

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too limited for

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class.

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, in recent times,

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transportation has become affordable. Not only that

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but

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offers

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of modes. We can go by

two wheelers

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, rickshaw,

four wheeler

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, steamer, aircraft, chopper, metro trains, mono trains and the list goes on.

Availability

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of these

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options

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made our life so easier! To conclude, I can say that we are definitely in possession of Numerous

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contemporary

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era. I believe that completely.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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231 words

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