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The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what extend do you agree?

#health #exercise
The most efficient way to develop and improve
health
 is to
exercise
 constantly. In my
opinion
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this
 statement is not totally correct, even though daily
exercise
 plays a crucial role in developing
health
, there is another factor to consider, having a proper
diet
 is as important as regular
exercise
. Why eating healthy is so important? Food contains nutrients
neccessary
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necessary
 for the human organism to survive,
for
instance
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 carbohydrates give us energy, proteins and lipids structure our cells and muscles,
although
 it is important to eat the right
amout
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amount
 of each nutrient without exaggeration
otherwise
 our body will be unhealthy. If our
diet
 includes
to
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 many aliments with a high content of sugar and fat, the risk of diabetes, ictus and
heart
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heat
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 stroke will be high. If someone wants to improve his
health
 it is vital
the
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 consultation with a nutritionist, as
though
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he will be able to prescribe a
well balanced
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diet
 and tell which kind of food must be avoided.
Health
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Healthy
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 eating habits are
also
 important to
exercise
 daily, as
previusly
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previously
 mentioned, carbohydrates provide us energy, It is important to know how much amid has to be eaten in order to
exercise
 without issues. In conclusion, the best method to increase
health
 is to combine daily
exercise
 with a properly balanced
diet
 prescribed by a nutritionist.
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