Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development?

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more and more similar due to people are able to buy the same

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anywhere. In

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essay, I will discuss both these views and give my own opinion on the matter.

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innovation has changed the way human beings

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have similar

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with, my attitude towards it is positive, I believe the case of

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can be beneficial. In

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case where we can buy the same

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anywhere in a kind of globalization. In

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situation, we can benefit a lot from it. 1st opinion, it will help to narrow the gaps between rich

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and poor

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to buy commodities as same as the rich

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, buying the same

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anywhere is able to promote

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competition among the retailers, which can not only lower the price of goods

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better the quality.

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economics

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some

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if every nation

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same

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machineries

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machinery

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will direct impact on the export and import. In

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process, it has a possibility for different

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to tighten their connection and strengthen communication, resulting in efficiency enhanced. In conclusion, I imagine that

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kind of fusion of market is positive, not only can it benefit customers, but

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the whole market. We are able to insist on globalization can all

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profit from it.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

globalization
diversity
homogenization
cultural assimilation
global connection
local businesses
economic impact
consumerism
standardization
westernization

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Task 2: Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?