Students should pay their full university fees themselves as they benefit from having university studies and not the society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In
a
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modern society, the phenomenon of whether or not
students
should pay their own
fees
has aroused wide concerns among circles and there is a wide spectrum of opinions on the source of
university
fees
. I am of the opinion that
students
should not be responsible for paying the
fees
of
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their courses. While pupils are still devoting most of their time to
attend
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university
courses, it is impossible that they could manage to pay
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enormous amount of money. Not only
students
are required to attend all the
university
courses from 9 am to 5 pm, but they are
also
needed to finish their coursework after school.
Hence
, it is unlikely for them to get a full-time job, in a bid to earn a sufficient amount of money to pay their course
fees
. If
students
are required to pay the
university
fees
on their own, they could end up causing a great debt, in turn, they would try to lend money from the
government
or banks and even alleviate the problem. Eventually, a debt of millions has been created before they start to work.
Therefore
,
poor
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financial status of
students
should be considered in order to grant their course
fees
. What is
also
worthy of our attention is that it will increase the willingness of
students
to work in society if their
university
financial burden could be relieved by the
government
. Since the
government
funding on
university
fees
can let the people understand that they are not being ignored by the
government
, they will eventually have a sense of belongings
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society and,
hence
, improve the productivity and gross domestic products, GDP, of a city for increasing its competitiveness. According to the unofficial statistics conducted by the
University
of Hong Kong, the economic growth of a fee-subsidizing city,
for instance
, Hong Kong, maintains
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a relatively high position compared to those without subsidized by the
government
.
Hence
, it is of significance that national spirit would be enhanced by funding the study
fees
of pupils. To summarise, it is obvious that
university
course
fees
should be fully granted with regard to the financial burden reduction and cultivation of the national spirit of
students
. It is hoped that the topic of
university
fees
subsidizing should be made worldwide for promoting a knowledge-wise globe.
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