Students should pay their full university fees themselves as they benefit from having university studies and not the society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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modern society, the phenomenon of whether or not

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should pay their own

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has aroused wide concerns among circles and there is a wide spectrum of opinions on the source of

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. I am of the opinion that

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should not be responsible for paying the

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their courses. While pupils are still devoting most of their time to

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courses, it is impossible that they could manage to pay

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enormous amount of money. Not only

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are required to attend all the

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courses from 9 am to 5 pm, but they are

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needed to finish their coursework after school.

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, it is unlikely for them to get a full-time job, in a bid to earn a sufficient amount of money to pay their course

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. If

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are required to pay the

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on their own, they could end up causing a great debt, in turn, they would try to lend money from the

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or banks and even alleviate the problem. Eventually, a debt of millions has been created before they start to work.

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financial status of

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should be considered in order to grant their course

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worthy of our attention is that it will increase the willingness of

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to work in society if their

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financial burden could be relieved by the

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. Since the

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funding on

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fees

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can let the people understand that they are not being ignored by the

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, they will eventually have a sense of belongings

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society and,

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, improve the productivity and gross domestic products, GDP, of a city for increasing its competitiveness. According to the unofficial statistics conducted by the

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of Hong Kong, the economic growth of a fee-subsidizing city,

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, Hong Kong, maintains

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a relatively high position compared to those without subsidized by the

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.

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, it is of significance that national spirit would be enhanced by funding the study

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of pupils. To summarise, it is obvious that

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course

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should be fully granted with regard to the financial burden reduction and cultivation of the national spirit of

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. It is hoped that the topic of

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subsidizing should be made worldwide for promoting a knowledge-wise globe.