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Some people believe that nowadays we have many choices. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this ?

#people #choices
Most the nations in the world believe crowd are working in different styles and lots of
stuff
 to do depends on society and what they want to become. In today's ,generation public have lots of
stuff
 to do in different fields.
For instance
, most of the social media influencers earned software engineering salaries and some are still working in 90s styles.
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 is exploring new
stuff
 and got attraction and feedback from the exploring thing. Technology generation kids are
also
 working some unique earned more than they spend. Technology changed lots of
stuff
 and affect human lives. For illustrate, food Vogler, technology adviser, review and etc.
Besides
,
this
stuffstuff
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stuff stuff
 helps in decision making and growing more competition in every field. As we know, these days society has become smart and working
style
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 are changed significantly personal and professional lives. Opportunities are everywhere and still need how to serve customers and audiences. I've strongly believed
this
 generation of teenagers wants to do some
stuff
. That's working style and spending money change completely. the public needs to focus on
stuff
 growing and becoming the best in their fields. Most companies offer work from home and society earns another currency from working in their homes.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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