nowadays , some people say that private vehicle are convenient for traveling . Discuss both view and given your opinion .

People have different views about how to transport these days. Some people believe that it is better to utilize their own vehicle,

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the others have the opposite view which is about

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use aeroplanes or trains. While there are some benefits in the latter point, I believe that using own vehicle usually have more pleasure.

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the

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view, travelling by personal car is very enjoyable, especially when your family are with you. It gives you an opportunity to circulate in the city which is not able to go by the tramway.

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, if you want to visit a rural area of the destination city, there are not many facilities to use them.

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, because buses take a certain route, you may get stuck in traffic. For

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reason, you can save your time bypassing the traffic jams by choosing other ways to reach your destination. On the other view, using public facilities for travelling

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has its own profits.

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, time is very important for some individuals like businessmen. Because of

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fact, they usually take a flight for their trips. Or moving among cities, using a bus or train is much cheaper than private cars. In conclusion, there are a lot of facilities for travelling among the countries or cities, but

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believe that utilizing a personal car for travelling has more entertainment.