In many countries teenagers are encouraged to do part time jobs. What's the situation like in your country? What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part time jobs

From the psychological point of view, the adolescent period is critical for juveniles to convert their major interest from playing with toys to knowledge learning, both academically and mentally.

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rigid knowledge learnt at

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, facilitating teenagers to get

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during their extracurricular

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is wildly tackled by many nations.

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there are disadvantages like

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occupation and distraction when

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are away from their major task, as mental development and future perspective are considered, I hold the point that the benefits overwhelm the shortages. Despite countries that support

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extracurricular strategy, there are other nations including my country China which stand on the opposite side, and their major concern might be that temporary

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could reduce

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' precious

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and distract them from sterile knowledge.

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, senior

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in China often are required to stay at

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from 7:30 am to 9:00 pm six days a week, it is clear that teenages who share a similar high

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schedule do not have spare

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work, and they have to reduce

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for joining in that extra activities.

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, they might find social works more intristing than cramming

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, and would think about their work at

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, many young

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in China go to

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directly after finishing high

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facing the fact that less than 10 percent of young generations could go to university. Provided that they have

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working experience, these teenagers might know better what they would like to do and to be in the future. Experiencing

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work before going to college or

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help the

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generations to get in touch with the

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easier and form their own carrer plans.

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, I never got a chance to think about what I would like to do in the future when I was at high

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, after graduating from which, I had to decide what I would like to do as a carrer in only one month before pursuing

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education,

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I almost choosed my major blindly.

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I turned out to love my major, many of my colleagues are not as lucky as me and they did like their major for a long

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. In conclusion,

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engaging in temperory

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as teenagers can occupy some

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and lead to distraction in some extent, it is still worthwhile to encourage

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genertions to do some easy community works of volunteer

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to discover the need of our

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and their anticipant careers.