Some people think students in primary school/ secondary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree.

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" says an adage and

hence

management

of

money

is an extremely critical skill that everyone must possess during their lifetime.

However

, the age at which

this

skill must be learnt has been a subject of debate. While a few people believe that

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must be imbibed into children during their schooling (primary and secondary), many believe that

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it is too early to do so. I certainly believe in the former and

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essay strengthens my argument. From the moment a child is born, it starts to learn through its surroundings and most importantly parents. While a parent teaches the child a variety of activities like eating, speaking, walking, etc., the real learning phase of the kids begins at the school.

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is where the learning becomes more enjoyable and effective owing to the presence of a supporting and more importantly, a disciplined atmosphere created by the teachers. With parenting becoming more and more challenging because of the exponential growth in technology, only schools can play

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vital role

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imparting critical life skills to

students

.

Moreover

, modern generation parents have been guilty of exposing their children to

money

at a tender age in the form of pocket

money

and gifts, albeit without teaching the kids the value of

money

.

Hence

, it is imperative that kids are taught the value of

money

during their schooling days.

Money

management

is nothing but a combination of mathematics and prudence which can be easily inculcated into the

students

by supplementing certain methods in their curriculum.

For example

, introducing the

students

to a game of monopoly will go a long way in making them comprehend a few critical aspects of

money

management

like buying, selling, mortgaging, constructing and renting a property. By introducing,

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like the above on

money

management

, the

students

will be at ease in handling

money

in a better way than before. To conclude, I strongly believe that

students

should be exposed to

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of

money

as a part of their school curriculum owing to its criticality in the present generation and

also

to the ease

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implementation.

This

will result in our future leaders being more prudent in the way they handle

money

during their

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lifetime

.