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Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with people who have a high-level degree. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued whether
people
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 who do physical
work
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 should get similar compensation to their peers who
work
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 in creative space. I neither agree nor disagree with the statement as I believe everyone should be paid according to the
value
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 they create irrespective of their profession or working style. Paying anyone more only based on which field or how they
work
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 is not a good way of compensating
people
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. Rather, it should be based on the
value
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 their
work
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 creates for the user. The bigger the impact and so is their paycheque size.
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, the innovation of a tyre included lots of physical
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, but the impact it made is immense and
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, paying them only for their physical
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 is not the ideal way to reward them.
Moreover
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, it will result in creating better
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 where
people
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 choose their
jobs
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 to deliver maximum
value
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 based on their interests and get paid handsomely for it.
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, the cheque size of
jobs
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 should be based on their usefulness to the world and not on how it is done. But there are practical problems on how to compare
value
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 created by different
jobs
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, which is the main cause of
people
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 not getting paid fairly. As a solution, we need to think of ways of how
value
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 can be measured in absolute terms for any activity, and
then
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 compare it with other activities’ values to arrive at a compensation matching the output.
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, it would not be possible to say directly whether a tyre is more useful than an algorithm that made our smartphones better. Only if their use can be converted into a meaningful single measuring unit, any fair cost can be assigned to it.
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, by trying to solve the issue of measuring values for any job profile
people
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 can be offered pay equivalent to their impact. To conclude, there is no clear answer to whether blue-collar
jobs
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 should be paid equally to white-collar
jobs
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. More efforts are required to compare the
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 derived out of each function, and
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, their wage rate can be finalised objectively.
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