An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Recommend the best time of year to visit and why – •Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose •Say what you would like to show your friend in your country
Dear Mark,
I hope all is well with you. I’m glad that you will be coming to
visits
my country. I would suggest you arrange your flights Wrong verb form
visit
in
between June and August as my country has special festivals, which Change preposition
apply
attracts
many international tourists. Correct subject-verb agreement
attract
Furthermore
, it is summer here during these seasons so you can have an opportunity to stay at beach
.
It would be great if you could choose a hotel near to suan beach, which has a great view Add an article
the beach
to
the city. The hotel has several compliments Change preposition
of
such
as free breakfast and dinner for international people like you. Furthermore
, it is also
safest
hotel to stay Correct article usage
the safest
as
it has Change preposition
in as
24 hours
surveillance Correct your spelling
24-hour
camera
.
I’m so eager to catch up with you and showFix the agreement mistake
cameras
a
few historical places in my country Correct pronoun usage
you a
such
as the statue of our great fathers and national
museum. Correct article usage
the national
Moreover
, I plan to show you a national zoom
, which has endemic animals like lions and blue tigers.
I am looking forward to catching up with you soon.
Best regards,
TesCapitalize word
Zoom
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Grammar
Make sure to thoroughly proofread your letter for any minor grammatical errors, such as verb agreement and articles usage.
Coherence and Cohesion
While the letter is generally clear and structured well, ensure each paragraph has a focused idea. For example, avoid combing discussing the hotel view and safety measures in the same sentence.
Tone
The tone of the letter is friendly, which is suitable for a letter to a friend.
Greeting and Closing
The letter opens and closes appropriately with a greeting and closing remark that enhance the overall coherence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite