some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

this

present world, there is a considerable amount of

information

that could be accessed by everyone. Many people claim that it is a great decision to spread

information

largely for economic and

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needs. Meanwhile, other groups argue that some

information

is too precious to be used openly. In my perspective,

although

, sharing data requires a high cost and is time-consuming for the valid

quality

of data,

this

method is the key

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improving our world.

This

essay will examine more about both standpoints. On the one hand, giving

information

freely could be helpful as it gives several benefits.

Firstly

, there are still many children who cannot afford a good

quality

of education as they do not have abundant

money

. Thence,

this

practice will probably add more resources to their learning process.

For instance

, some students who come from the countryside get a lower

quality

of education than the ones from the city centre. It is because their school might not have well-equipped.

Secondly

, giving training to employees could increase the

quality

of human resources in the company,

however

, some small businesses could not have much

money

for making that event. As an illustration, a home industry usually hires employees who do not come from university as it only offers a low wage,

consequently

, the employees tend to

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lack creativity. For that reason, getting free access to the economic journal could help them to enhance the

quality

of

workforce

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.

On the other hand

, doing research for making a journal or essay that could be used for academic needs does not come over a night. Some projects could be held over several years which cost a large amount of

money

.

Moreover

, when they encounter a hardship which makes them restart the process,

this

will take more time to finish it. To illustrate, scientists are working hard for finding a cure for cancer disease, but they have to take much research due to precise evidence. To conclude, finding

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good

quality

data might cost much

money

and time,

nevertheless

, it will be invaluable for many countries, especially developing countries. It sounds unfair to scientists,

therefore

, the government should give a higher appreciation for them by giving them a wealthy life and a higher salary.