2 The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
They say
education
is the key to success.ln many countries, educating younger people is a number one priority however
it is argued that it is also
important to educate adults
who are unable to read or write and the state must spend money
on them.l moderately agree with this
statement. This
essay will discuss why l do not fully support the idea.
On the first
hand, education
will remain the key to unlocked doors so then
it is of utmost importance that it is prioritized for the future generation. Spending loads of money
on childrenAdd the comma(s)
,
for example
, giving them free education
will reduce the number of illiterate adults
,therefore
, they won't be any need for adult education
.This
concludes my point on why I do not agree with the point if
spending lots of Correct your spelling
of
money
on adult education
.
On the other hand
, spending money
on adult education
is a backward development although
it will assist them with the critical skills, The government will spend huge
amount of time and resources because it takes more time and energy to literate an older person compared to the younger one.Add an article
a huge
For example
, it is proven scientifically that the brains of children are more
spongier than Change the word
apply
older
Add an article
the older
generation
they can absorb different things in a short period of time. Learning to a child is more interesting than to Fix the agreement mistake
generations
adults
.
To sum up, looking at the points discussed, it is more advantageous to promote and prioritize education
to
younger children Change preposition
for
instead
of adults
. This
will help to reduce the rate of illiterate aged people.Submitted by Kally199226 on
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