Shopping is dangerous because it makes people selfish and careless with money. Do you agree or disagree?

Since time immemorial, shopping has been a part of our daily activities. Some

people

opine that shopping leads us to become lethargic and pay less attention to

money

management;

therefore

, it is harmful

for

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human beings. From my perspective, purchasing products is imperative to live in

this

modern world and boost the

economy

. One of the upsides of shopping is rooted in the fact that innumerable

people

have little time to manufacture self-made goods on their own. In

this

fast-changing world, they are supposed to work, which means that they are subjected to obtain the products online or in shops effortlessly. Houses,

for instance

, are built by skilled craftsmen in many cases, and we need to spend a staggering amount of time planning the models and acquiring sophisticated skills if we have a desire to erect their homes themselves. Another merit is that

people

can facilitate the

economy

through

this

action because exchanging

money

for items is the cornerstone of the economic activity, which

otherwise

compromises the quality of

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. → influences that exert detrimental on

people

’s characteristics cannot be negligible. ではなく、 On the flip side,

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that

people

exert on their characteristics cannot be negligible. To give an illustration, online shopping often contributes to the devastation of

people

’s monetary sense, as they can only feel like undergoing a transformation of digital figures, which makes them more tolerant

to

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overusing their

money

. To give an example, online shopping often contributes to the devastation of their

money

senses as they can only feel like undergoing a transformation of digital figures, which makes them more tolerant to overuse their

money

.

Moreover

, buying desirable items enables the general public to have an indolent personality, provided that they are less likely to generate handmade ones with a little perseverance. To conclude, albeit there are possible

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impacts of shopping, it is a great boon to our hectic lifestyles and

economy

. As long as

people

capitalize on their

money

appropriately, it cannot become a bane to our daily lives. To conclude, albeit

with

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possible negative impacts on

human's

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sluggishness, shopping is a great boon to our hectic lifestyles and

economy

. As long as they capitalize on their

money

appropriately, it cannot become a bane of our daily lives.