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Some think that politicians should always be honest while others feel that there are times when they must lie. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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While some
people
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 feel that the
politicians
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 must sometimes lie, others, myself included, believe that they should be honest. Some
people
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 believe that
politicians
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 should lie as they have a duty to protect the country and the
people
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.
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, they must be able to keep secrets so that both the enemy and the rival political parties can not
use
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 them to strike.
Politicians
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' lies can
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 be a political strategy to achieve their political goals and plans.
Politicians
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 need to know how and where to lie, and they need to be able to
use
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 method.
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, lying to
politicians
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 can be a kind of political struggle and strategy.
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, they must be able to correctly identify sensitive situations and situations and
use
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this
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 ability and method with the least damage and cost.
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, some
people
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 believe that
politicians
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 should be honest. They are in power for a long time, so they must be able to gain the
trust
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 of the
people
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, which is done with honesty.
People
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 can
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 be honest with
politicians
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 about the state of society and the country to help and support them if needed.
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,
politicians
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 must gain the
trust
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 of the
people
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 during politics and not let their
trust
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 in themselves be lost, because the loss of
trust
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 has serious consequences for them.
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, gaining
people
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's satisfaction and
trust
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 in the customer can help
politicians
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 in the
next
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 elections. In conclusion,
politicians
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 need to know how to
use
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 lies and know when and in what situations they can
use
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 them, but honesty and truthfulness in attracting
people
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 and supporting
politicians
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 can be important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • integrity
  • transparency
  • ethical dilemma
  • diplomatic tact
  • misinformation
  • public trust
  • social fabric
  • national security
  • pragmatic politics
  • democratic principles
  • accountability
  • role models
  • grey area
  • public perception
  • preventive secrecy
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