More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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as their principal communication.
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describe some possible solutions to avoid
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. The main
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caused by using
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car
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is
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a
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. It is perused that the
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is increasing day by day. Comparatively,
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is not
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everyday
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. They are fashioning a
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it is seen that most of the
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cannot move from one place to another area due to a
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of pending aspects. Trafic is spreading heavily and
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nobody
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no body
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nobody
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cannot remove it.
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, the area is creating hinder to every
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. The possible solution is to create a restriction on
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moving. There might be a limited number of cars accessing
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the path.
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, everybody uses private
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and they create a
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on the
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. If there is a
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restricted
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, the traffic jam
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would not occur.
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, there must be creating some tax on
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so that
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can avoid
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it. It can enable
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to go anywhere
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foot.
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, some kind of public transportation should be used to solve
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problem
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, the bus carries a
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of
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and if it
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in the city there might be a
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of traffic
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which can enable
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pedestrians
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to move freely on the
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. In conclusion, private
car
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causes a
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of
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to
restict
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restrict
people
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on the
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. The possible solution is that create a limitation
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use
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native
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vehicles
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