Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men's, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career. It is said: "A woman's place is in the home." What do you think?

Some people argue that
women
are equally capable in each activity as
men
.
Moreover
, they are able to cope with issues,
men
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cannot. Others share a different opinion, that
women
should stay at home.
Nevertheless
, unfortunately, their
work
seems to be less valuable in comparison with
men
´s and
therefore
I am going to give my own opinion. I agree that
women
have the same abilities as
men
do, at least in the majority of activities or occupations. It can not be denied that
women
are equally capable in comparison with
men
, if not more for the particular occupations. One of
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is that they may be more precise and organized in some white-collar
jobs
as a result
of the management of households and children.
In other words
,
women
´s necessity to deal with more things in comparison with
men
,
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might be the source of the enhanced
work
system which is suitable
for example
CEOs or teachers. Later on, I believe, that
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shift in the ideology of the appreciation of
women
´s
work
, is fortunately happening, if it is not already completely achieved. From the other point of view,
men
's gender is physically stronger and
therefore
there are some activities and occupations, which are
men
better.
For instance
, sports results reached by
men
are far beyond
women
´s physical gifts. Regarding
work
, blue-collar
jobs
are generally more for
men
.
For instance
, letting
women
practice hard manual labour may be a source of insufficient results and presumably some serious health issues. To conclude, from the aforementioned arguments, doubtlessly,
women
have the same abilities to perform a vast number of
jobs
as
men
do.
Nevertheless
, there are some
jobs
, which are more suitable for
men
.
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