In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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computerised
automobiles
are drastically increased in
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semi-automated
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and
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automated
driverless
vehicles
. Scientists believe that in the near future all the present manual
automobiles
will be replaced by
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driverless
automatic
vehicles
, due to their positive outcomes. Though
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driverless
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large number of benefits, I believe there are numerous drawbacks
such
as, they might not able to follow the
traffic
regulations
and
drivers
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their
employment
.
Undoubtadly
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,
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of the automatic
vehicles
is a revolutionary for
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mankind.
This
will save
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lot of money and
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time for the citizens in the process of procuring
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driving license.
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permission for driving everyone should go through training and
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by the theory and practical
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.
In addition
, these
vehicles
can contribute
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wars by carrying
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explosives.
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, during wars, without impacting the life these
automobiles
can be used to send explosives to
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base
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Thus
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these
vehicles
are going to contribute a lot to
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man hours
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in the future.
However
, despite the advantages, there are many negative outcomes for
driverless
automobiles
.
First
and foremost, these
vehicles
might fail to follow the
traffic
rules and
regulations
which lead to accidents.
For instance
, these programmed
machines
follow the rules and
regulations
based on predefined
traffic
rules and signs, if there is any change in
such
regulations
these
machines
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work as expected which tends to accidents.
Secondly
, many
drivers
across the globe may
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their
employment
as
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driverless
cars
not
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required
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drivers
.
Finally
, these
machines
bring some threats to
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society
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their technical drawbacks and to the
drivers
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employment
. To recapitulate,
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driverless
automobiles
are
definetly
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definitely
one of the greatest technical innovations.
However
, these
machines
comeup
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come
come up
with some drawbacks which might be a serious threat for our future generations in terms of controlling the
traffic
and
drivers
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employment
.
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, I believe that the disadvantages of
driverless
vehicles
outweigh the advantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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