Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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people
all over the world are most likely to work from their home, and most family
decide to give an education to their Change to a plural noun
families
child
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children
let
them study from their home because Wrong verb form
letting
technology
that they Add an article
the technology
use
for communication become more
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more
easier to Change the word
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use
than before. From my point of view, technology
makes life more
easier than before.
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Technology
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significant
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past
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the past
people
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or communicate with their Fix the agreement mistake
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the other
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people
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and people
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technology
to playing as an important role.
I personally think that these technologies can be both positive and negative development. On the one hand, Add an article
the technology
technogy
can be extremely beneficial. As it can be seen that Correct your spelling
technology
people
are now interact
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interacting
to
their friends or their colleges easier by using chat programs or video calls programs. Change preposition
with
Moreover
, people
can working
from home more easily because they Change the verb form
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be working
use
these technologies for
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to
works
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work
computer
, and send them through Add an article
the computer
a computer
internet
. Add an article
the internet
In
the other hand, Change preposition
On
technology
can be problems
. As Fix the agreement mistake
problem
people
can addicted to them by using them all day long, and forgot things around them in Add a hyphen
real-world
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the real
such
as children playing online games for days and did not have proper
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a proper
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playing
the important role, do their work or their study.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
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technology
can be both positive and negative influences, people
who can use
it for their benificials
and avoid to addicted Correct your spelling
beneficial
with
their negative influences are Change preposition
apply
perfect
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