Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families, and spend less time entertaining outside. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that teenagers or young adults are obligated to spend more

time

with their

parents

and families when they have free

time

, and not entertain themselves outside the house,

while

some agree with the opposite opinion. I believe that they should be doing what they prefer to do and I will discuss the aforementioned opinions in

this

essay. Spending

time

with family is a nice way of going through your day, as it helps

bonding

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to bond

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with

parents

or other members and fulfil the role of being their children to make the

parents

happy.

Although

it is a very strong and comprehensive reason to support

this

claim, if the

parents

are incapable, it won't help the development of the teenager, as they should have their priority on self-development more than following society's rules for morality. Entertaining themselves outside the house ,

however

, gives them the opportunity to vastly explore different things and experience many situations,

such

as trying to buy concert tickets and travel abroad without the help of

parents

.

Furthermore

, even though the sole purpose of the activity is to entertain, they gain valuable experience indirectly from the aforementioned

activities

and more if they try the aforementioned

activities

with friends or people they know and are close to. In conclusion, I disagree with the claim that teenagers must spend

time

with their families in their spare

time

, and

instead

, experience entertaining

activities

by themselves. All teenagers should try doing

activities

by themselves, as it will help them grow more as a person, and help them find their true selves faster.