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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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In
this
 contemporary era,
people
 have a chance to become bilingual and multilingual. Currently, most of them are trying to acquire other language skills apart from their mother tongue.
Moreover
, some communities
learning
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 foreign speeches to fulfil their work or travel purposes in
a
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 international country. While others demonstrate that there are various reasons why someone
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in their lifetime.
This
 essay will focus on these both opinions and I will elaborate on my opinion too.
To begin
 with, nowadays, the citizens who live in poor economic nations , are able to abroad for their work and study purposes.
Besides
, they tried to obtain other
countries
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countries'
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 accents to develop their speaking abilities.
For example
, presently,
Canadian
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 government has provided opportunities with jobs and study
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for other nations because of that they have tried to acquire knowledge about the language of Canada.
Therefore
, wherever they are able to communicate with native
people
 , become sociable and have a space to engage with international cultures.
On the other hand
, wherever
people
 who want to become experts in foreign languages,
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 have plans to get carrier opportunities or travellings.
Additionally
, they become fans of non-familiar languages
film
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films
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 or teledramas and they have a curiosity to know about
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their
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culture
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 heritage and other things in that country.
For instance
, now, Korean dramas had popularity among
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of
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 the world while some of them tried to know
Korean
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 language to get known about their culture.
As a result
, these
people
 strive to equip
in
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with
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 other accents because of
enjoyments
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. In conclusion, in my perspective, I completely agree that if humans try to travel and hope to work in the foreign destinations, they definitely want to get skills in non-native languages as well as a person who does not have
broader
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a broader
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 purpose to learn , would be able to get fulfilment .
Also
, Even if
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a
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bilingual is a trend
in
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around
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 the globe
know
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now
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.
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