The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.
The map diagram illustrates conversions in Nelson
city
today.
Overall
,
while
the first diagram shows the university and
city
centre
remain the same, the
second
diagram illustrates the new hall of residence, shopping
centre
, covered market, shop, restaurant, bars and clubs, pedestrian
road
,
train
station and
trainline
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training
train line
are built. İn 2000,
the
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Nelson town has a university,
train
station, old marked and a
road
. İt
also
had small woodland. Today, the
train
station was relocated and made bigger. The hall of residence is constructed
in
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the
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northwest of the town. The old market was demolished and a new one was erected in the west of the
city
. The restaurant, bars and clubs are assembled near the port of the
city
.
While
there was a
road
in Nelson
city
in 2000, the pedestrian
road
was put up
instead
of the
road
in the present. The new shopping
centre
is built in the
north-east
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of the town. The
train
line was constructed from the
city
centre
to the university.
Finally
, a bike rental scheme was come up with in the
city
centre
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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