The internet has made traditional libraries unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss giving examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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According to some people,
libraries
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became less important these days because of
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technology. I am of the view that the internet has replaced the need
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libraries
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for all parts of society.
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with, online reading
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wide
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a wide
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range of information
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in
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short
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period of time.
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is helpful for students specifically and researchers who need many types of scientific articles in their studies.
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, the availability of multimedia structures from different videos, photos and data as well as encyclopedias make
study
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process easier for all kinds of students.
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, accomplishing more homework in
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time.
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, reading books online is more convenient for workers who need to spend
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of the day at
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. In fact, more than 50% of employees need to work
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over time
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hours to make ends meet and to cover life expenses these days.
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result in reaching home at 8:00 pm daily with no energy to go out again for any reason.
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,
internet
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the internet
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offers
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a valuable
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chance to sit on
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and enjoy reading from
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an e-book
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with no worries of traffics and hassle that can pop out on the way to
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the library
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.
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, reading online is considerably
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since numerous
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websites platforms display different kinds of books free of charge. Once the internet connection has been
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, no extra cost is needed.
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,
application
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an application
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like Storytel provides hundreds of books
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variety
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languages
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of languages
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and an option to hear the lines through
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facility while walking or driving for free.
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,in turn, saved a lot of money
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be spend
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in
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library membership or
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for
delay
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or damage of materials when
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them. In conclusion,
although
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many individuals may
favorites
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libraries
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to gain literature these days, I believe technology has made
libraries
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unneeded because of
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the range
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of information provided, conveniences and
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of
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budget.
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