You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to express my sincere thanks for confirming my one-year English admission course with your school.

Hence

, I would like to know more about the school schedule for the upcoming academic year along with fees related information as well.

Firstly

, I am coming from a lower-income family category and it would be good if there is an opportunity to have shared accommodation which is going to save my daily expenses . If possible I am willing to share my books and basic utilities as well

such

as Internet, gas and hydro too.

Secondly

, I am new to overseas education and request you to please let me know if we have someone to guide me during my

first

week of stay. As you know I would prefer only vegetarian food and I am very much appreciated to have only green leaf curry, no matter if there are any additional costs for my special food and I am ready to pay weekly basis.

Therefore

request you to please do let me know about the vegan diet schedule and payment-related information as well. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Mon May 23 2022

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You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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