Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, thanks to technological advancement, the phenomenon of replacement of

language

with translation software has aroused wide concerns among various circles and there is a wide range of opinions on the utility of electronic translation.

Nevertheless

, I vehemently agree with the view that learning a

language

is irreplaceable. Today, I would like to shed light on

this

topic.

Firstly

, learning a foreign

language

allows us to have a sense of satisfaction and confidence.

Although

a

language

learning process might take several years to get improved, it is of uttermost importance that it allows us to establish a sense of satisfaction if we could communicate with foreigners by using other languages effectively.

Hence

, the level of confidence can be increased as well,

this

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would increase our job competitiveness in the future. Since

foreign

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language

,

for example

, English

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the main communication medium, it is unlikely that we could impress interview panels if we primarily rely on a translator to convey our message throughout the interview process. What is

also

worthy of our attention is that people can appreciate and embrace other cultures by having an understanding of the

language

of other countries. Not only can the

language

provide us about its culture, but

also

teach us about its history.

For instance

, in Chinese characters, each stroke of a character represents a specific meaning which is responsible for explaining the word and the Chinese culture itself. Throughout the learning process, in spite of showing respect to other cultures, we could

also

understand the unique

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characteristics

of different cultures

instead

of being stubborn and only considering our country as the best nation.

Thus

, our spiritual quality of life can

then

be enhanced. To summarise, regarding the personal and mental development that mastering a foreign

language

might have, it is of paramount importance that we should rely solely upon

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electronic software to convey messages. It is hoped that the general public would find mastering another

language

interesting and satisfying.