Your neighbour is burning garbage in the backyard which is causing you great inconvenience. Write a letter to the head of the municipal council. In your letter, describe the problem mention when the problem began suggest what you think the municipal council should do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter in regard to the problems which I am facing due to
my neighbour.
The problem started,
when my neighbour Mr. Whistler started burning his garbage in his backyard. Just because we share the same backyard wall and my kids usually play in the backside of the home, I requested him to stop Remove the comma
apply
this
activity as fog from the fire creates inconvenience while
breathing for everyone.
As far as I remember this
trouble started at the beginning of last
week, and despite my request he has been performing the same action since last
week. Unfortunately, nothing is in my hands now and that is
why I decided to take municipal council help.
I would appreciate it if you could guide him to follow any other alternatives to dispose of his garbage instead
of burning it because this
can be the reason for air pollution and health problems for the local people.
I looking forward to your reply and immediate action on this
situation.
Thank you
Yours faithfully
Arthdeep hairSubmitted by arshkaurbrar on
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task achievement
Try to give specific details to make your description more vivid and convincing. For example, mention specific health issues that the smoke from the burning garbage has caused.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases to improve the flow of ideas. Words like 'however,' 'therefore,' and 'consequently' can help with this. For example, 'Despite my request, he has been performing the same action since last week; therefore, I decided to seek municipal council help.'
coherence cohesion
Ensure the closing sentence is grammatically correct to maintain the formal tone throughout the letter. Consider revising it to 'I am looking forward to your reply and immediate action on this situation.'
task achievement
You have effectively described the problem, its start time, and suggested a solution, which addresses all parts of the prompt.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for a formal complaint to a municipal council.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is clear and logical, which aids in understanding your main points.
coherence cohesion
You have separated your ideas into different paragraphs, making it easier to follow your argument.
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of your letter are appropriate and courteous, maintaining a respectful tone throughout.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite