Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support you

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All of my support is on that statement. Once Mahatma Gandhi
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“ Every home is a university and the
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are the teachers “. That quote is quite purposeful to us and the meaning of it is so simple but so deep inside and its potential is overwhelming for the whole universe because it is composed of human beings
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if there are no
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there will be no children. I have two specific reasons concerning it.
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, when I was little, I used to play with kids near my house.
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I played, my
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didn’t allow me to play for as long as I wanted to. They always called me up and said that now it was time to study, eat, take a nap and something like that. To be more accurate, I was at a boundary of discipline all the time in every aspect of my childhood
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. I followed every single word my
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said.When I grow up, I would love to be a punctual
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everybody respects. Now, I know the value of time, the most precious treasure throughout our
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and
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know the wealth of discipline. It’s so easy for me to handle everything by myself in every corner of my world.
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is one of the things I learned from my
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, the leader of my
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is my mental behaviour. I wanna tell you something about it. My
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always treated me in peace and guided me the right way I can clearly see even if I made mistakes which they were told a thousand times not to do on account
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they didn’t want to influence dreadful manners upon me.
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a beautiful way, I started my
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step
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the world. They taught me that kindness is not a weakness but a kind of power. A
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without kindness is powerless. Kindness means noticing someone else's needs. It means seeing the value in every
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we meet. My
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showed me how to be an appealing
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with gentleness, warmth, compassion and love. Once Mahatma
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Gandhi
Ghani
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“ In a gentle way, you can shake the world”. The other treasure of my
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is trust from me
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others and vice versa. Whether we are conscious of it or not, it’s the main leader of communication with people. I have always been making a special effort into it. The trust I am willing to give and take from everybody around me. The heritage words from my
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regarding it, trust is like our blood which is flowing through every part of our bodies without missing any areas. They taught me it very well. Let me finish the famous
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of Mahatma Gandhi “ There is no school equal to a decent home and no teacher equal to
a virtuous
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a virtuous parent
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parents
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” .
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