The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The table illustrates the changes in
sales
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of Fairtrade-labelled
bananas
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and
coffee
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in 1999 and 2004 in various European
countries
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, including the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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, Denmark, Belgium, and
Sweden
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.
Overall
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, the
sales
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of
coffee
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in five
countries
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showed an increase within five years, and there were the largest
sales
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in the
UK
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growing by more than 18
million
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EUR. Banana was most popular in
Switzerland
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compared to other
countries
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. As can be seen from the first table, the
sales
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of
coffee
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rose in all regions from 1999 to 2004. The
UK
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had the largest
sales
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of
coffee
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increasing from 1.5
million
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to 20
million
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during
this
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period,
While
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there were the lowest
sales
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in
Sweden
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rising from 0.8
million
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in 1999 to 1
million
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in 2004. The
second
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table shows the
sales
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of
bananas
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in the same
countries
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.
Switzerland
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had the largest
sales
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of
bananas
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from 15
million
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to 47
million
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increasing a lot within five years.
Switzerland
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, the
UK
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, and
Sweden
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showed an increase in
bananas
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while
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Sweden
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and Denmark decreased. The
sales
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of
bananas
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in Denmark were the lowest, decreasing from 2
million
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in 1999 to 0.9
million
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in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, bananas, coffee, countries, uk, switzerland, sweden, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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