The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Currently, the

internet

is the most powerful communication of

humanity

and everyone is able to connect

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other whenever they want. In my opinion, I've always thought that

this

technology

has both benefits and drawbacks

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the same

time

.

To begin

with, the

internet

is the communication way which supports

people

to send and receive data as far as they want and makes

people

always connected.

Moreover

, the advancement of

technology

lead us to adapt

internet

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to use in

computer

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computers

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and especially

smartphone

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either for entertainment or work. Those

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make

people

can live easier without any doubt, but, we are not able to refuse that there is some trouble came from using the

internet

, which is outlined in the

next

paragraph.

Firstly

, the

first

drawback is that twenty-four hours available. The majority are seduced to join the world of data and entertainment. It affects

people

's routine life to be not constant and lack of discipline,

for example

,

people

will not sleep at the appropriate

time

but desired

time

, which unfortunately reduces human living efficiency.

Furthermore

, those technologies cause

people

will be connected all the

time

. As we can see when individuals use their

smartphone

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. Talking with someone located far away is an easy task to do nowadays because of a helping from

technology

. Fortunately, some countries announced serious measures about using mobile

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with hoping to separate

humanity

from the world of

internet

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. To conclude, all technologies, not only the

internet

and smartphone, in the meantime, can support and destroy

humanity

.

Hence

, the importance is developing and utilizing it carefully and wisely, it surely results in the most beneficial thing for us.

Finally

, I strongly believe that

humanity

can overcome the drawback of

technology

and gain the most effective result.

However

, we need to remember that every coin has always two sides, the same thing can become our weapon or toxic depending on our use.