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Crime rates are likely to decline due to the advancements in technology , which will help prevent and solve crimes in an easier way . Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued, that violation rates can decrease significantly with the help of new modernised gadgets. I strongly opine with
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 notion that
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 cutting edge technology will definitely assist in preventing and
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 solving
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criminal activities. In
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 present era, there
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 been a lot of inventions in the field of technology which are very helpful in solving crime rates
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survilliance
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surveillance
 cameras,
anti theft
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 devices and lie detectors . Because of their
usefullness
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usefulness
, they are considered
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an
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important "tools of invasion" by the Police officials for resolving a significant number of criminal cases .
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 devices and cameras have proved to be providing a sense of security for the people.
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, a recent study conducted in The United Kingdom has concluded that there has been a subsequent fall in the violation acts after
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 of digital cameras in most of the streets there.
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, these technical advancements play a pivotal role in determining the
law breakers
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. Other than
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, one of the major
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 of
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 gadgets
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 been seen in preventing many terrorist activities.
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, they have not only helped the
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 department in avoiding
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 mishappenings rather they have been beneficial in saving many lives.One of the best examples of
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 technology was seen in
Mumbai
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 terror attacks where through the satellites the location of terrorists was traced,
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, it helped in preventing many
casualities
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casualties
 which could
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 enormous. So, modernised gadgets have been proved to be a
higly
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highly
effecive
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effective
 means of capturing
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offenders. To conclude, advancements in
technolgy
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technology
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 played a vital role in the decline of
offenses
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offences
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. It is indeed a very effective and efficient means by which difficult criminal cases can be sorted out with
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ease.
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, I completely agree that these tools are remarkable with regard to
crime solving
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crime-solving
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.

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