Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a natural phenomenon that, has
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and down in human life. Some people say it is best to accept
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like unstable financial stages, while others argue that, we have to try for better and improve our lifestyle.
This
essay discusses both views and
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up my opinion through the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, we cannot always believe or blame fate whenever something happens in our life,
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and wasting the
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, we need to look for the solution that helps the scenario better. For ,example if I fail an exam on the
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attempt, I have to attempt it again by analyzing my mistakes , rather than blaming the position.
Also
if we cannot recover from the worse
time
it may lead to some other problems like depression or ,
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they may end our soul. The increasing rate of suicide is common news among Indian women, because of a lack of experience to overcome their mental frustration caused after marriage. At the same
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, some position we cannot change ,
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, many people lost their job or they are forced to do an unsatisfied job, for their daily existence,during the covid
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such
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time
to make the situation better. In another way, even though we tried our best and did not get the result,
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that
this
is not for us. In a nutshell ,
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some bad things happening our lifelike, the death of our favourite one, we cannot change and have to accept the condition. But in many
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we can improve by trying again and again without simply blaming or accepting the bad moment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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