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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

#people #homes #areas #study #work #cities #development
In many countries, educational
systems
 make
students
 who are 15 years old focus on just certain
subjects
, but other
systems
 believe that
students
 should study a wide range of
subjects
 until they leave school. The benefits of a certain only number of
subjects
 can limit
students
 at the age of 15 but if they focus on a lot of
subjects
, they can be more successful and extend world view. I think a wide range of
subjects
 outweighs certain
subjects
. Both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding. 88
To begin
 with, the damage caused by only certain
subjects
 varies considerably depending on both the
education
 of fixed
systems
 and limited information.
Therefore
,
students
' brains can not improve hard at an early age because of
systems
.
For instance
, my cousin who has lived in Nigeria for 10 years knows many
subjects
 less than American
students
. One of the biggest reasons for that situation is the quality of
education
 programs in Nigeria. Indeed, these issues may be solved by governments or genius citizens.81
On the other hand
, recent research suggests that focusing on certain objects can be detrimental for
students
 who are 15 years old. so if we want to improve their
education
 level, we should give a wide range of
subjects
 until they leave school.
Thus
 they should identify the areas they are good at and choose them.55-224 To sum up, the youth will continue to be drawn towards more developed areas in search of better
education
, jobs and lifestyle.
However
,
this
 phenomenon will, eventually, bring prosperity to all.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Urbanization
  • Educational institutions
  • Job prospects
  • Wages
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Overpopulation
  • Cost of living
  • Rural depopulation
  • Social isolation
  • Traditional values
  • Personal growth
  • Recreational activities
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