Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In many countries, educational
systems
make
students
who are 15 years old focus on just certain
subjects
, but other
systems
believe that
students
should study a wide range of
subjects
until they leave school. The benefits of a certain only number of
subjects
can limit
students
at the age of 15 but if they focus on a lot of
subjects
, they can be more successful and extend world view. I think a wide range of
subjects
outweighs certain
subjects
. Both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding. 88
To begin
with, the damage caused by only certain
subjects
varies considerably depending on both the
education
of fixed
systems
and limited information.
Therefore
,
students
' brains can not improve hard at an early age because of
systems
.
For instance
, my cousin who has lived in Nigeria for 10 years knows many
subjects
less than American
students
. One of the biggest reasons for that situation is the quality of
education
programs in Nigeria. Indeed, these issues may be solved by governments or genius citizens.81
On the other hand
, recent research suggests that focusing on certain objects can be detrimental for
students
who are 15 years old. so if we want to improve their
education
level, we should give a wide range of
subjects
until they leave school.
Thus
they should identify the areas they are good at and choose them.55-224 To sum up, the youth will continue to be drawn towards more developed areas in search of better
education
, jobs and lifestyle.
However
,
this
phenomenon will, eventually, bring prosperity to all.
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  • Migration
  • Urbanization
  • Educational institutions
  • Job prospects
  • Wages
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Overpopulation
  • Cost of living
  • Rural depopulation
  • Social isolation
  • Traditional values
  • Personal growth
  • Recreational activities
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