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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Vamsi and I am a regular commuter benefited from your
bus
 services and I have been travelling on daily bases from my home to my office and vice-versa. Mention, there is only one
bus
 service that runs between these two locations on
this
 particular route. I would like to bring a problem that I am going through to your notice that I have really been getting late to the office for the past two weeks caused by delays of the respective
bus
 service. It has been very difficult to convince my manager every day when I was not on time to work and due to
this
 I have been very stressed. In order to improve the timelines of your
bus
 service, I would like to make some suggestions. Mainly, the number of
bus
 services and their frequency to ameliorate to transport the huge number of people on that route. Hope you would consider my request and provide the right solution to the above-mentioned problems. Yours Faithfully, Vamsi
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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