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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Write 250 words within no more than 40 minutes.

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It is considered that in the coming years,
people
 will only read
newspapers
 or
books
 online because of their affordable price the physical
books
 and
newspapers
 will be left undesired.
Although
 I agree that reading
newspapers
 and
books
 on the internet will become the main trend, I believe that printed media will always be existed and be a part of modern society's life. On the one hand, nowadays
people
 tend to access everything, including news and
books
, via the internet due to its convenience and its cheapness.
This
 way, everyone can read any news, magazines, or
books
 at any time and everywhere as long as they have a smartphone a tablet, or a notebook
that is
 connected to the internet.
Moreover
, they are able to purchase
e-
books
 and subscribe to premium membership of online news portals for cheaper than the physical versions.
For instance
, a recently widely known Korean novel named Pachinko, cost about 10 dollars at the bookstores, while it is only priced at half of the price, roughly 5 dollars, at Google Play
Books
.
Therefore
, nowadays, a growing number of
people
 are enjoying reading
e-
books
 and online
newspapers
 more than the printed versions.
On the other hand
, there are still lots of
people
 that fond of reading
newspapers
 and
books
 in the printed format. That means, they find a different
senses
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 between flicking through physical
books
 and
e-
books
. Taking
books
 or
newspapers
 by hand will create a real emotion and is more interesting than reading them on the screen of a phone or tablet. As an illustration, data revealed that
people
 who read criminal stories through
e-
books
 tend to forget the detail of plot stories more than those who read printed
books
. That’s why paperback
books
 and
newspapers
 will not disappear from our lives. To conclude, though I agree that
e-
books
 and online
newspapers
 demand will increase over the
next
 years, I believe that physical
books
 and
newspapers
 will be able to survive and not vanish from our community.
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