Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * Say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event * Suggest a suitable venue * Make a recoomendation as to entertainment e.g. Dj, jazz band etc.

Dear Sukh, I'm sorry for being unavailable to meet you for a long time. At the same time, I'm very excited to share my suggestions about the celebration of your 25th birthday
next
fortnight. There should be a big party which is unique and different from the other parties, which is based on a fancy dress event in which every guest should wear the dress
that is
fashionable or it can be a theme-based function under which we can decide a particular theme to organize the whole day. As
this
is the big day of your life, make sure you enjoy it to the fullest. For making
this
a successful one, It is mandatory that It has to be held at a suitable venue. I heard about a resort, Orchid view, which is near to your house
that is
very famous for celebrating the occasion. You should try to check the place whether it is available at that time or not.
Moreover
, The above-mentioned destination had various sources of entertainment
such
as DJs, Jazz bands etc.
However
, I'll like to recommend you, arrange a group of musicians who will perform to make that evening more beautiful. I can't wait to join you and enjoy the precious moments with you. Best Regards. Kuljeet Kaur.
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